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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 01:13, 8 March 2018 (UTC)
- Is it reasonably well written?
- "Final Fantasy XV takes place on the fictional world of Eos; ..." I can't say I've ever seen two semicolon breaks in one sentence before. I'd replace the second one with a period/new sentence, but up to you.
- "Noctis Lucis Caelum" is first Wikilinked in the Chracters section? Should 'Noctis' be Wikilinked at its first instance in the Gampelay section?
- "Story-related weapons are the Royal Arms" - so what exactly are these? Are they melee weapons?
- "Final Fantasy XV was the second biggest Final Fantasy launch after Final Fantasy XIII" - too much Final Fantasy haha. Not sure what you can do about it though, have a think but no worries if you can't fina a way around this.
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail: Really impressed with this one. Looking forward to passing following minor adjustments. Freikorp (talk) 02:04, 8 March 2018 (UTC)
- @Freikorp: All done! --ProtoDrake (talk) 10:50, 8 March 2018 (UTC)
- Passing :) Freikorp (talk) 13:31, 8 March 2018 (UTC)
- @Freikorp: All done! --ProtoDrake (talk) 10:50, 8 March 2018 (UTC)